The 100m sprint

L.G: precise words

S.O.S:

5 Adverbs, 5 Adjectives

5 speech, 5 said is dead

It was 6.30pm on a dark thursday night, I was getting ready for the 100m sprint. Everyone was watching with their beady eyes. “ On your marks,” declared my dad “set,” “boom,” went the great gun.

I started running rapidly, the 100m sprint wasn’t my thing but got there in the end. As I  hit the 50m mark I was tied with Camryn.

Then when we got to the 30m mark she quickly zoomed 1m ahead but I pushed my way ahead. I had to keep pushing so i stayed ahead, and that's what happened.

25m still ahead, 15m still ahead and 1m left to go.Done, I had won my tense race with camryn right behind and all the other girls behind her. “Well done,” began Camryn “You did so well,” I replied.      

Georgie went to the zoo

One sunny day

Georgie went to play

He went to the zoo

Where the monkeys say boo

Georgie looked at the monkey

Who were pretty funky

Georgie touched the glass

As the monkey pass

The monkey bit georgies finger

Georgie ran to his mum

Who was quite dumb

How to take off in a plane

L.G: use precise verbs

S.O.S:

• Haven’t used put, get and grab
• Include humor
• Min 6 steps max 10 steps

Do you want to know how to take off in a plane, well listen up.

Here is what you will need:

. Of course you are going to need a plane!!! Daa.

. 1 person

. 1 shed

. 1 cliff

Here we go!!! [ CAUTION NOT FULLY TESTED ]

Cartwheel into the plane and start the engine.

Make sure you’re in the shed or should i call i t a hanger.

If you have a seat belt please chuck it on or else!!!

Make sure everything is working before you take off

Lift here we go

Through  the shed door we go

And off a cliff

Oh  that's right you have wings so you are not going to die use the wing s if you have if you do.

If you didnt followed this properly may have died . If you didn't try it well done you saved your life . If you did try it you may have died as well .

How to make a bottle cap fidget spinner

Audience:  juniors

L.G: use precise word to give accurate to my reader

S.O.S

- Precise nouns-include your materials in your steps .

- Descriptive verbs - clean/replace

- bossy verbs at the start of sentence e.g: stick - glue, tell them what to do.

Do you want a fidget spinner but don't have any money? Heres how to make a bottle cap fidget spinner.

Here is what you will need:

.5 bottle caps [ 2 big and 3 small]

. scissors

. 1 black marker

.1 glue gun

.1 screw driver

.parent/ Adult

.1 skewer

1. Get your 2 big bottle caps and your

Screwdriver. Make a hole big enough your skewer can fit and spin.

2. Then get your Adult to supervise you while you are gluing.

3. Make sure you don’t cover the hole.

4. Then get your scissors and skewer.

5. Slot your skewer in the hole and cut it so that it's 5 centimetres long on each side and glue the ends of the skewer so it doesn't fall out.

6. Then get your marker 3 little bottle caps

7.with your marker mark how tall your little bottle cap in the middle is in the middle.

8.repeat this twice so that it looks like a fidget spinner

If you followed this proprley you will end up with a fidget spinner.

  

20-3-17

Addison Whitikia

Room 6

Year 5

Stratford Primary School

Regan Street,

Stratford

Moana Hancock

RD 21

Stratford

Dear Moana Hancock

Thanks for helping us out on camp, we really appreciate it.

Thank you for helping us on the swing bridge.  It was so nice of you to go out of your way to help us.

You were so nice to come to camp and do our walks, and watch our cool camp consist with your warm Winnie the pooh blanket.

You are so nice. Thank you.

From Addison Whitikia  

Addison Mihi

Tena koutou katoa,

Ko Taranaki te maunga

Ko Tangahoe  te awa

Ko Aotea te waka

Ko Ngati Ruanui toku iwi

Ko Meremere toku marae

No Whakaahurangi ahau

Kei Stratford toku kainga inaianei

Ko Stratford primary toku kura               

Ko Whitikia toku whanau

Ko  Jack toku papa

Ko Gemma toku mama

Ko Addison toku ingoa

No reira, tena koutou, tena koutou, tena tatou katoa

 

Wilkies pools.

L.G: Moment in time.

I see all these people going down and having fun,so I think, “ Should I do it” The taste of fresh water is so good. My feet are going numb I can’t feel them.I start to climb the most rockiest hill I have ever climbed. I have shivers down my spine, I’ve got butterflies in my tummy the rushing water makes it worst. I sit there thinking,“Will I die’’. While I go down everything rushes before my eyes. As I walk out I hear all these people cheering for me. My nose has unblocked and I can smell fresh air everywhere.