20-3-17

Addison Whitikia

Room 6

Year 5

Stratford Primary School

Regan Street,

Stratford

Moana Hancock

RD 21

Stratford

Dear Moana Hancock

Thanks for helping us out on camp, we really appreciate it.

Thank you for helping us on the swing bridge.  It was so nice of you to go out of your way to help us.

You were so nice to come to camp and do our walks, and watch our cool camp consist with your warm Winnie the pooh blanket.

You are so nice. Thank you.

From Addison Whitikia  

Addison Mihi

Tena koutou katoa,

Ko Taranaki te maunga

Ko Tangahoe  te awa

Ko Aotea te waka

Ko Ngati Ruanui toku iwi

Ko Meremere toku marae

No Whakaahurangi ahau

Kei Stratford toku kainga inaianei

Ko Stratford primary toku kura               

Ko Whitikia toku whanau

Ko  Jack toku papa

Ko Gemma toku mama

Ko Addison toku ingoa

No reira, tena koutou, tena koutou, tena tatou katoa

 

Wilkies pools.

L.G: Moment in time.

I see all these people going down and having fun,so I think, “ Should I do it” The taste of fresh water is so good. My feet are going numb I can’t feel them.I start to climb the most rockiest hill I have ever climbed. I have shivers down my spine, I’ve got butterflies in my tummy the rushing water makes it worst. I sit there thinking,“Will I die’’. While I go down everything rushes before my eyes. As I walk out I hear all these people cheering for me. My nose has unblocked and I can smell fresh air everywhere.

3-5-17

L.G:  Create a mood of fear - horror

S.O.S:

- Language that creates fear

- Adjectives - Nouns

- See - hear

Audience: Mum - Dad

Dear Mum and Dad,

I’m shivering in horror just looking at the dead bodies not to mention me, with bullets therw my leg. More in my arms. I cried as I saw my sister dead on the ground trying to cralw back to safety. I got much more petrfied and furious than before. I have to keep going for my sisterand family. I hope I can make it out alive…

Love Addison